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Summon Vienna
It's painful and humiliating for a demon to be summoned, torn from their normal realm and bound to a single place and time. Of course, if and when one finds a flaw in the bindings, it can make all that suffering worthwhile.

The picture is of :iconfoxinshadow:'s demon (succubus) pone Vienna, escaping her bonds upon summoning. I made it as an entry for his 20k watchers contest, and though the submission is almost on time for me, it's quite late for Germany. I had a lot of fun figuring out how Vienna's form might correspond with her summoning circle pattern. Pencils and colored pencil.
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biasedeyes Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
I liked The Crystal Empire because it seemed a little bit like what might actually happen if you took six people and shipped them off to a different country to prevent an impending invasion. Essentially, I liked it BECAUSE all of its storywriting elements failed so badly but it remained somewhat true to the characters, making it lopsided and unique.
In most stories, you have everything well-composed and it sails in an easy arc. This means that it's fairly easy to predict what's going to happen next, unless there is a dues ex machina of some degree.
In the Crystal Empire, the first thing that happens is that Twilight misinterprets Celestia's transfer of responsibility as a command to work alone. Then, she and her friends go to a distant empire, their arrival to which severely taxes its security. Once there, they are confused and out of their depth, but manage to pull together a festival of sorts, and just barely manage to help defeat the tyrant king.
I guess it's because they are usually so effective that I find The Crystal Empire so fun... it's interesting to see them flounder a bit. But I must say that I haven't been a fan of Season 3 as of yet... It seems like the Mane 6 are losing characterization episode by episode. I don't want to see them ineffective all the time, and I guess I felt like The Crystal Empire would be an exception rather than the new rule. That, and it appeals to my isolationist sentiments (my feeling that meddling in the affairs of other countries uninformed is usually just asking for trouble).
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byter75 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
That's fair enough I guess.
There's obvious cracks, in the story being told, making it less obvious how it's going to try to tell its story.
I just prefer a predictable story told well rather than an odd one told awkwardly...

I do also share the thoughts about characterisation in S3. It's going to be the subject of my next journal.

I think in short all the characters are so much more cartoon-y than before. Compare any S3 to S1 episode and it should be mostly obvious. I'm gonna try to explain why I thought S1 was better for character building.

Also any feedback on said journals'd also be appreciated. :)
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biasedeyes Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
My favourite is a offbeat story told well... of course they are extremely rare. I can't think of any examples in film, and only one or two books off the top of my head. (Sam Llewellyn's Little Darlings and Debi Gliori's Pure Dead series come to mind)

It seems that, instead of going to all the effort of actually writing characters, DHX has taken to simply announcing things (as you alluded to in your recent review). Episode 6 also featured a pretty painfully out of character moment when Rarity had her sister lug all her stuff up a mountain.
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perseveringrose Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student Writer
thanks for the watch!
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10art1 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for watching! Have a Pinkie! [link]
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ColoredSpice Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
Thanks for da +watch
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SharpM1nd Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
Have a lama, and thanks for the watch!
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Will3Style Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanx for the watch...:)
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Rariedash Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanx for da watch
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ryoma01sux Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I haven't uploaded anything artistic since before, well I was good at anything. So not much point in watching my dA, but thanks anyway.
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biasedeyes Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
If you don't put anything there there's no difference between watching it or not, and it puts you on my friends list. If you don't want me watching, though, just tell me.
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ryoma01sux Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nah, just telling you, I'm aware of the friends list thing. I'll probably start uploading some doodles.
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CMWVisualArts Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:icony-u-noplz: Y U NO SPEAK MOAR?
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biasedeyes Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
Uh... because I have a really bad excuse?
Probably because it takes a lot of effort to think of what to say. :P
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CMWVisualArts Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh. Really? You struck me as a person that could articulate full paragraphs in half a second.
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biasedeyes Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
That doesn't mean that it's easy... :paranoid:
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DruidFables Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you for the :+devwatch:! :hug:
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WMill Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch~!
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Eagle1Division Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is your singing telegram -
- I hope it finds you well!
I thank you for the watch,
You know it's really swell! :D
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Skardan Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist
Oh a watcher, have some pie. :iconpie-plz:
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biasedeyes Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Pie! :)
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Photonicsoup Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have derped my way over here to thank you for the watch!
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biasedeyes Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Derp!
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PictureByPali Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much for stopping by and putting me on your watch list

I am happy you like my work

Sincerely
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killythirsk Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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